I agree pretty much on most all accounts, BUT... you are pretty bad writer. I'm 100% sober and a pretty smart guy but I had to re-read half of this b/c it was all in (parentheses). Just write a sentence, complete a thought, and put some punctuation in there and it should be more legible. Half of the people reading this are stoned so don't make it any harder for them to read than it should be. Pretty solid review though otherwise.

.02